Example response to Section A using extended PEE structure

Discuss the ways in which the extract constructs a representation of gender. Refer to sound, camera, editing and mise-en-scene. (Sherlock; 2016 exam)

The initial male character that we are introduced to, whilst central to the scene, is represented as anxious and out of his comfort zone. A mid-shot first introduces Lestrade and this allows the audience to see a concerned expression on his face. This anxiousness is reinforced with the diegetic sound of the camera shutters – they are loud and intrusive and it seems to suggest the pressure he is under. At the same time, non-diegetic deep music plays under the scene. It suggests danger/threat. All of this offers a representation that this man is unexpectedly panicked and lacking control. This is further established as the female officer speaks – there are various cut ins to Lestrade so the audience can read his expression and the camera is unsteady suggesting his state of mind. One of the wider shots shows Lestrade nervously twiddling his thumbs – another suggestion that this male character is out of his depth.

The representation of the female officer in this first scene shows a level of control and authority. However, it is clear that the male is her superior and she is there to assist him. Whilst her voice dominates the start of the scene (a clear, calm tone suggesting she is more in control of the situation then him), it is Lestrade who dominates the screen time. This editing choice suggests the rather typical gender stereotype that men are more important/have higher status than women. There is one particular close up that shows both the female and Lestrade – she is answering a question yet her face is out of focus whilst Lestrade’s is in focus. It is obvious the audience are meant to be viewing this press conference from his perspective. Another interesting representation of typical gender roles is when the Daily Mail reporter asks about the possibility of a serial killer – Lestrade’s tone of voice immediately becomes patronising as he makes his response. Finally, the reverse track as they leave the press conference sees the female officer trailing behind Lestrade as he strides forwards and out of the shot – it suggests he has regained his status as alpha male now that he is safely away from the reporters. She is left in frame unsure of what to do.